Not being able to sleep, having a craving in the middle of the night. Tiptoeing your way to the kitchen, hoping no one catches you. Opening the fridge, searching for something to snack on. Not finding anything in the fridge, moving over to the counters searching and searching not being able to find anything munch on. Remembering of your mother's secret stash of treats, searching again for the place she keeps them. Until finally you find them, you hear your stomach churning of hunger, you grab a handful run back to your room sit in your bed wondering if that is enough, starting to devour everything you can, finishing everything, feeling horrible of what you had just done, feeling your stomach start to churn over pain.
Nowadays your prepared for that midnight craving, you have prepared your own secret stash which you munch on only when you are hungry and alone in the darkness. Not having to worry about getting caught, the first time was awesome, but when doing it over and over again you begin to relize it isn't so good for you with all the stomachaches you've been having. Until one day you relize you do have to just do it by midnight you can do it at any time in day. When you know everything will be all right your golden.AWESOME
Your use of all the -ing words is effect in creating movement. I wonder what other devices you purposefully use -- and words from your personal dictionary? 2
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